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Vigs Thy girl
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Number of posts : 1069
Age : 63
Location : On top of the King Dune in Nature/National park Thy
Job/hobbies : reading, writing, needlework, music, lots of colours, animals
Humor : I\'m a funny girl
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afrodita
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Number of posts : 869
Age : 33
Location : Gondor
Job/hobbies : Writing poetry
Humor : Very good,some people say
Registration date : 2007-10-08
|  Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story.  Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:10 pm | |
| Ah that is a nice thread,Vigs!! Thanks Vigs!  | |
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Vigs Thy girl
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Number of posts : 1069
Age : 63
Location : On top of the King Dune in Nature/National park Thy
Job/hobbies : reading, writing, needlework, music, lots of colours, animals
Humor : I\'m a funny girl
Registration date : 2007-10-08
| | Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story. Thu Nov 22, 2007 4:02 pm | |
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afrodita
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Number of posts : 869
Age : 33
Location : Gondor
Job/hobbies : Writing poetry
Humor : Very good,some people say
Registration date : 2007-10-08
| | Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story. Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:02 pm | |
| On Christmas miracle happens"they say
"pray and it will happen" hear a small girl
sitting on her knees,praying to God and his angels
A candlelight on the window shines so weak
but it gives hope
Snow out is falling down
looks so beautiful on the little candlelight
A bell can be heard and a soft music
going out from girls' heart
It aches much,but she has faith
Faith in the happiness,Faith for a batter life
The fire on the fireplace mirrored a shadow
Maybe God?Maybe he heard girl's prayer?
probably her miracle is going to happen
The girl turned back,but say nothing
Disappointment appeared in her heart
grief got bigger
Her golden hair doesn't look so shining anymore
Flame in her eyes can't be seen
A wind blows in the room
and turned off the candle
it got to so dark and cold
and suddenly....
The whole town lights up
music is all over the street
Everything out is white and happy
Her miracle is coming? | |
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Vigs Thy girl
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Number of posts : 1069
Age : 63
Location : On top of the King Dune in Nature/National park Thy
Job/hobbies : reading, writing, needlework, music, lots of colours, animals
Humor : I\'m a funny girl
Registration date : 2007-10-08
| | Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story. Fri Nov 23, 2007 8:30 pm | |
| Here is a little, clumsy verse from me. I hope you like it anyway. Perhaps I can write more to it later.
Inside it’s cosy, nice and warm. Outside it’s dark, cold and storm. It’s autumn now, the dark part of the year. It’s because the winter and Christmas is near.
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afrodita
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Number of posts : 869
Age : 33
Location : Gondor
Job/hobbies : Writing poetry
Humor : Very good,some people say
Registration date : 2007-10-08
| | Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story. Fri Nov 23, 2007 8:46 pm | |
| It's nice and you surely must continue writing it to the end! Ah I see you even protected it!!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Your own poetry or short story. Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:31 am | |
| Clumsy? Ah it is nice Vigs.  Is there more? |
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Vigs Thy girl
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Number of posts : 1069
Age : 63
Location : On top of the King Dune in Nature/National park Thy
Job/hobbies : reading, writing, needlework, music, lots of colours, animals
Humor : I\'m a funny girl
Registration date : 2007-10-08
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